Friday, September 6, 2013

The hook to my new story!


Everyone was out on the dance floor having a good time. Annabelle wore her new pink satin dress, which gracefully floated across the room as she spun and twirled. The band played with speed and zest as couples jumped from side to side and up and down. Martin looked devastatingly handsome in his navy suit and pink bowtie to match Annabelle’s dress. The couple looked almost picturesque as they slow danced and gazed into each other's eyes. The gaiety was contagious and there was not a single person in the hall that didn’t have a smile beaming from their face. However it only took a second for the joyful laughter to turn into shouts and screams as gunshots rang through the large wooden room. As the people scattered, only three were left lying in their own pools of blood on the cold dark-wooden floor.

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